[Dzeris]

./NormalSchool/Events/Location/School/Classroom Shared/GangbangGirlByFutas.ve.xml

After all, she's certainly not saying No.  And she is whimpering is post orgasm pleasure...</Str>

./NormalSchool/Events/Location/School/Rooftop/RoofRelief.ve.xml

<Str>{Name} is clearly in a hurry to orgasn, panties pulled aside and a vibrator to speed things up.

./Schools/NormalSchool/Events/PersonAttachedEvents/RaymundChain/Sherilyn_Encounters.ve.xml

<Str>Looks like they're in the middle of an argument. {if=({var:KnownSexLevel} > 2);then=[color=\{Color\}]"I mean it! I'm sure you'll grow to enjoy if it you just give it a try!"[/color]

[dalzomo]

There are many instances of the phrase "it's course" in NormalSchool (and three times in Templates), as part of the phrases "run it's course" or "nature takes it's course". Those should be "its course", without the apostrophe.

Additionally, there are a few instances of the phrase, "letting nature takes it's course" which should be further modified to remove the S from "takes", making it "letting nature take its course".

There are many uses of the word "throws" when it should be "throes", as in the phrase "throes of passion."

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BethManiliStudy.ve.xml
Line 3335: Soon she is the throws of an intense orgasmshould also add the word "in", to make it "Soon she is in the throes of an intense orgasm"

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DetentionFingering.ve.xml
Line 1840: throws of climax
Line 1860: throws of climax

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LockerGirl.ve.xml
Line 1352: throws of an orgasm.

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SmithBlackmailRoom7.ve.xml
Line 7740: throws of ecstasy...

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YuriSex.ve.xml
Line 1641: throws of their orgasms, you're attention's drawn to an audible gasp behind you.should also change "you're" to "your" (and maybe also separate "attention's" into "attention is") to make it "throes of their orgasms, your attention is drawn to an audible gasp behind you."

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ParkerLateToClass.ve.xml
Line 3889: throws of her climax

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POOActivities.ve.xml
Line 7942: throws of her own orgasm

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ParkerTrain.ve.xml
Line 5761: throws of an orgasm.

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Tutor Hana.ve.xml
Line 5585: throws of her own orgasm

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Tutor June.ve.xml
Line 3832: throws of another mutual orgasm.

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Tutor Rie.ve.xml
Line 7652: Still in the throws of her climax, she skittles forwardalso, "skittles"? maybe the writer meant "skitters", though "scooches" would be less insect imagery invoking

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Line 7744: throws of an orgasm.
Line 7841: When the throws of pleasure
Line 7902: throws of climax...
Line 7919: Still in the throws of her climax
Line 7991: throws of an orgasm.

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Visit_PeterToy.ve.xml
Line 7725: throws of juvenile bliss
Found while hunting for "throws" misuses

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DildoPlay.ve.xml
Line 4435: flicks her her dildo up to max.Remove one of those instances of "her"

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WrestlingClubParticipation.ve.xml
Line 5645: "The rules are simples, we simply needs to put the other on the floorI don't know if that "needs" is supposed to be the vernacular of the speaker or a typo. If a typo, it should be "need"

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DareGame1.ve.xml
Line 1933: The she throws the pantiesRemove "The", capitalize "She"

[⚧ Squark]

That's a lot of orgasm throwing.

[Dzeris]

./NormalSchool/Events/Location/School/Classroom Shared/CoolOffStrip.ve.xml

<Str>Some girls make love to boys, some girls make love to a camera... but {Name} is making love to to fan.

[nemo777]

I don't if this one was already reported in the Sierra Hardman quest, the first blowjob/handjob you read "the sight of your cock seems to memorize her"
I'm guessing it's "mesmerize her".

[⚧ Squark]

I don't if this one was already reported in the Sierra Hardman quest, the first blowjob/handjob you read "the sight of your cock seems to memorize her"
I'm guessing it's "mesmerize her".

Or maybe it's your cock that memorises her. H-Game protags tend to have their brains in their dicks, after all.

[nemo777]

I don't if this one was already reported in the Sierra Hardman quest, the first blowjob/handjob you read "the sight of your cock seems to memorize her"
I'm guessing it's "mesmerize her".

Or maybe it's your cock that memorises her. H-Game protags tend to have their brains in their dicks, after all.

she won't be forgotten ^^

[TBBle]

FunctionLibrary\PCGeneralSex\TextMakers\Fingering_Text Node 338: (Futa mutual vaginal fingering path)

As the words leave {his} lips, {Gender:a solid load of cum shoots from his engorged cock|wetness gushes from her throbbing pussy|a think load of cum shoots from his engorged cock}.

That last "his" should be "her", as that's the futa text. Currently it produces:

As the words leave her lips, a think load of cum shoots from his engorged cock.

Also, "think" is probably supposed to be "thick". Unless futaism comes with both hypersexuality (per an event with Karin) and self-aware semen.


A mild one (and I didn't check exactly where) but the new "Personality description" text for flirting in at least one case (but not all cases) ends up with two newlines before it. I suspect the extra newline is in the "how the target feels" description, not the personality description. I think it was one of the "uninterested" descriptions. Before the new "personality description" was added, they wouldn't have mattered.

Edit: Got it. Index 3 of node 47 in Interactions\Relationship\Flirt has a trailing newline, and the others don't.


Location\Your Home\Tutor Rie node 505:

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Continuing your kisses, you move over her lips, her chin, her throat, and down until you kiss first one, then the other of her nipples.

As her ripe young nipples blossom under your oral caresses, you run your hand down and around her thigh.

She mews very quietly[color={Color}] "{PrincipalGender:mister|miss} {PrincipalLast}...  are we...  are we going the whole way...? "[/color] 

Responding with equal quietness[color={PrincipalColor}] "only if that's what you want Rie...  only if that's what you want..."[/color]
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Her eyes move to {PrincipalGender:gaze at the throbbing hardness pushing at your pants|gaze at your breasts longingly|gaze first at your full breasts, then at the throbbing hardness pushing at your pants}.

[color={Color}]"i think so {PrincipalGender:mister|miss} {PrincipalLast}...  yes...  i think so..."[/color]

And you know she's ready to proceed...  Albeit still unsure of where this will all end up.

Has three lines that use a lower-case letter at the start of the speech-act ("{PrincipalGender:mister|miss}","only", and "i think so"), that I believe should be captialised. The other text in this event (in an incomplete check) capitalised such cases too.


Extraneous newline in the last sentence of Location\School\Classroom Shared\DaisySpied, node 406:

You dart out the opposite way and it's not until you've locked the door to your office behind you that you

finally come while fantasizing about Daisy Maddox in a sexier uniform - maybe a miniskirt could get past the PTA?

Location\School\Classroom Shared\MathPerverted node 46 appears to be doing needless pronoun substitution, given it's on a track which is already male-student only. The other two possible text blocks for this path don't do have these substitutions.

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{Mr} {Last} has decided to mix up today's math class by making the students act as the objects to be measured.

Today it seems to be the {Gender:boys||futa}' turn, and they are having to let their fellow students measure their dicks.

One of {boy}s has gotten one of the fashion-focused girls to measure {him}.

{He} can't help but get hard, which thankfully was needed. Though, even if it wasn't you doubt the girl would complain with how big {he} is.

At this point, the Person-Context Dictionary is pointing at the teacher (Beth Manili in this case), producing:

Miss Manili has decided to mix up today's math class by making the students act as the objects to be measured.

Today it seems to be the ' turn, and they are having to let their fellow students measure their dicks.

One of girls has gotten one of the fashion-focused girls to measure her.

She can't help but get hard, which thankfully was needed. Though, even if it wasn't you doubt the girl would complain with how big she is.

(Note that the Gender: substitution on the second line is producing nothing. I bolded the other incorrect substitutions that used the teacher's gender instead of the male student.

I'm guessing at some point futa students were able to go down this path, but currently they go down the same path as female students.


Location\School\Principal Office\SandraTitsbigMeeting node 99 implies that the period for triggering the Location\Titsbig\Floor\SandraTitsbigTherapy is 16:00 - 21:00. (Or 22:00, the wording's unclear, I suspect that is supposed to be "finish by", since the session is an hour long, or maybe that's supposed to be her work-finish times?) However, both the event and the Smartphone diary give "Whenever she's home between 15:00 and 22:00." as the possible range.


Location\School\Ward\Measurement_Male node 125 has a needless sentence break.

Officially it's to ensure that any school-issued sports equipment that would be on his groin.

Such as a speedo, or jockstrap with a cup would be the proper size and not cause him any discomfort or immodesty.

That's all one sentence. (I'm also not overly fond of the number of hard-breaks in the middle of sentences, nor of the one-sentence-per-paragraph style, as they end up using like half the text-box width at 16:9, and hence often introducing needless scrolling. But that's a wider issue than the typo thread. Like that full-screen text overly in that one quest, there's a style-consistency discussion to be had, and alignment work to be done by someone.)


Location\School\Principal Office\BellStrip node 278 has both missing words and badly-worded choices.

When you feel your orgasm rising, you briefly consider her request that you give her a/some warning.

But what do you decide...?

The choices are "Yes" or "No", but that's not really a yes/no question. They would read much better as "Warn her", "Don't warn her". Otherwise the question could be instead written as "Do you decide to warn her?" or similar that is explicitly yes/no.

[barteke22]

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Fixed, along with 30+ permutations of those typos.

Except the newline mid sentence, as while I don't quite like/follow that part of the style guide myself, it's part of what was decided upon.

Re: Style guide.  As per event contrib guide, the style that was decided upon prior to 1.9 is as follows:

- Max 4 lines (with linebreaks between, so 7 lines) per text box (or paragraphstop).
- Each line up to like 50-60% of the 1080p width.
-- Inserting newlines if the sentence can't be shorter.

I've always followed a similar style for my stuff.
 - Except up to 80-95% of the 1080p width if need be (no newline mid sentence).
 - And no line limit in config explanations, people can scroll if they need info on a specific menu item.

[TBBle]

Fair 'nuff, I wasn't aware of the style guide. Those rules seem fine, the only places where the mid-sentence newline and very limited text width is problematic is when it introduces scrolling that otherwise wouldn't happen, and your style guide extract suggests that these should be split into separate text boxes, so that's still a solution. (Although I guess that doesn't count as a typo, so I won't report any such cases here. ^_^)

[shpungout]

Events\ExtensionLibrary\GameHelp\Intro2_LydiasSchoolTour.ve.xml, ID: 163

Stepping out into the street once more, and you encounter a rather attractive young {man}...
...
[color={PrincipalColor}]"Well in that case...  Thank you Mrs {Last}..."[/color]
[color={Color}]"Actually, it's {Mr}.  And there's no need to thank me.  Elaine Dickinson, of the Regional Schools Department, asked me to."[/color]

If the {man} template is applied, it means that it is possible that Lydia Swan may initially be a male. In this case, it looks strange that the main character addresses him as "Mrs.".

I propose to fix it this way:

[color={PrincipalColor}]"Well in that case...  Thank you {Gender:Mr|Mrs} {Last}..."[/color]
[color={Color}]"{Gender:T|Actually, it's Miss. And t}here's no need to thank me.  Elaine Dickinson, of the Regional Schools Department, asked me to."[/color]

Same with ID: 217

[color={PrincipalColor}]"Why, thank you Miss {Last}...  You're a gem!"[/color]

[shpungout]

Events\Location\School\Principal Office\SierraHardmanMeetings.ve.xml:

ID: 75 & ID: 83

[color={Color}]"Okay then,"[/color she says before walking away.

ID: 18

[color={Color}]"Oh thank you sir!"[/color] she says.
[color={PrincipalColor}]"And since she is already aware of it, I'm not gonna bother letting her know about this incident,[/color] you say.

ID: 56

[color={Color}]"Thank you so much Ma'am![/color] she says before hugging you.

[shpungout]

Events\ExtensionLibrary\GameHelp\Intro3_LydiasMgtInsights.ve.xml, ID: 29
Lydia says:

[color={Color}]"Well, you see...  Elaine asked me to avoid getting into details at this stage.  {He} said she wanted you to start with a clean slate."

Who is "{He}"? Is Lydia referring to herself in the third person? =)

[shpungout]

Items\Drinks\Large Bottle of Beer.xml

A large botte of your favorite beer.

[shpungout]

Events\FunctionLibrary\MiscChainSpecific\CustomMinigames\Chemistry.ve.xml, ID: 133

phosphoroyl nitride  >  phosphoryl nitride