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[HHS+] Smallville Scenario: Event contribution

Started by barteke22, Jun 02, 2022, 05:56 PM

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Ame

Quote from: barteke22 on Jun 16, 2022, 10:54 PMIf you want to try out VEE there's a link to both the text contribution info and some general guides for it in the guides link below (and the one at the top).

While the guides might look like a lot, they're mostly about quality of life stuff and tips, plus details. It boils down to connecting boxes on a canvas to form a chain of stuff you want to happen (conditions > show image/NPC > show text etc > apply stats > pass time).

I won't expect beginners to provide perfectly structured events obviously (especially if you don't know much about simple programming logic).  But it would definitely be a helpful start to have the events in the right folders, and with some basic flow.  Either way, add comments about what you want to actually happen, so it can be verified and fixed/improved/implemented.

For generic events (not story chains) there's now also more streamlined condition Functions (under FunctionLibrary\GeneralEvents) - so there's better flow and less RNG/fighting to things.  Basically if an events's Try is filled with random conditions and nothing from that folder, it's likely not a good example to follow for generic stuff (outdated logic).

Yeah, I think I still wanna start out contributing text for a bit. How do I start in any case? Join the discord?

barteke22Topic starter

#16
Either works, might be faster there if you've got any questions.  The process is mostly figuring out what's already there (and probably looking into it), coming up with some concept for where you want it to go.  Then maybe finding some images (unfinished chains might have a few already) so you know what you're working with visually and well, writing the text.

barteke22Topic starter

Quote from: Donkdn on Jun 05, 2022, 02:06 PMI created an event for continuing the cooking club chain, since I wanted to contribute a bit.

I haven't finished writing all the dialogue and the formatting needs some work, but I wanted to post it to find out if the idea is acceptable. I also would like to find out what needs improvement.

If my idea seems good enough, I will finish the rest of the event...

Sorry for the late feedback, I've been a tad busy so didn't look at the events themselves (better done in batch), but the text itself looks good (and I see that there's comments for logic).  If the whole thing is tied into progressing the club further (story), feel free to fill out the details (as you make them) in the club's Info Database entry for tracking (though note them as WIP).

Malorn

#18
Quote from: Donkdn on Jun 05, 2022, 02:06 PMI created an event for continuing the cooking club chain, since I wanted to contribute a bit.

I haven't finished writing all the dialogue and the formatting needs some work, but I wanted to post it to find out if the idea is acceptable. I also would like to find out what needs improvement.

If my idea seems good enough, I will finish the rest of the event...

Hey there, I'm going to dive into the events really quick to get a look at them. Sorry it took so long, it took me a while to catch up with everyone.

Ok, so pretty solid all around, though the logic itself will need testing, but nothing obviously wrong. As far as the intention... yeah sure, why not? Cooking with bodily fluids seems a very logical progression, I'd say run with it. I'm sure there are plenty of images for it.

Obviously you'd want to have some followup events showing various extraction methods, etc. Basically just building out the follow-through. One thing though, one of those images is .webp, which is not the best format. A couple others are .png, which will have bloated file sizes. Basically just convert everything into .jpg and then run it through the compressor. (https://tinypng.com/) But that's just polish, the core is solid.

Malorn

Quote from: OutOfUniqueNames on Jun 06, 2022, 09:35 PMYou guys didn't lose the latest dev build with the forum loss did you? Is there any event adds we need to be aware of that are in the dev-only build? The locations that could really use events are probably Park and Lake for student events and probably Red Corner for the general population that aren't Students.

I actually have a huge mishmash of random events on my end of things, but that's normal for me. I normally have about 10 or so in events in various degrees of creation at any one time. But none of that material is lost, it was all safely on my computer.

On the plus side, the park and lake are areas I've been focusing on recently, and there's a few more events still on their way for those areas.

Masked

Apologies, I realize I'm extremely new to the form and thus can obviously be considered not trustworthy yet, but I am willing to help with a variety of content. I do have some experience writing generally, and even writing 18+ stuff(relating to M/M stuff only though). I won't be able to be a massive regular contributor right away due to health reasons, but I do have some ideas both for existing characters and a new one I have tried coming up with. I already have an rough outline for them and am willing to share. I am also willing to do a 'test' of writing skill if that helps earn trust just because I am so new to this form. My only thing will be that I don't think I can do sex scenes other than yaoi. I'm willing to write non-sex scenes for other combinations, and even try the sexual but not full-on sex scenes. It's just a block I have when it comes to writing. I also probably won't be using VEE since I don't understand and won't have the time and focus to learn it for the upcoming month or two.

OutOfUniqueNames

Quote from: Malorn on Jun 20, 2022, 12:28 AM
Quote from: OutOfUniqueNames on Jun 06, 2022, 09:35 PMYou guys didn't lose the latest dev build with the forum loss did you? Is there any event adds we need to be aware of that are in the dev-only build? The locations that could really use events are probably Park and Lake for student events and probably Red Corner for the general population that aren't Students.

I actually have a huge mishmash of random events on my end of things, but that's normal for me. I normally have about 10 or so in events in various degrees of creation at any one time. But none of that material is lost, it was all safely on my computer.

On the plus side, the park and lake are areas I've been focusing on recently, and there's a few more events still on their way for those areas.

That's great to hear, thanks!
"Yuri is supreme!"

-Me

Donkdn

Quote from: Malorn on Jun 20, 2022, 12:25 AMHey there, I'm going to dive into the events really quick to get a look at them. Sorry it took so long, it took me a while to catch up with everyone.

Ok, so pretty solid all around, though the logic itself will need testing, but nothing obviously wrong. As far as the intention... yeah sure, why not? Cooking with bodily fluids seems a very logical progression, I'd say run with it. I'm sure there are plenty of images for it.

Obviously you'd want to have some followup events showing various extraction methods, etc. Basically just building out the follow-through. One thing though, one of those images is .webp, which is not the best format. A couple others are .png, which will have bloated file sizes. Basically just convert everything into .jpg and then run it through the compressor. (https://tinypng.com/) But that's just polish, the core is solid.

Quote from: barteke22 on Jun 19, 2022, 12:04 AMSorry for the late feedback, I've been a tad busy so didn't look at the events themselves (better done in batch), but the text itself looks good (and I see that there's comments for logic).  If the whole thing is tied into progressing the club further (story), feel free to fill out the details (as you make them) in the club's Info Database entry for tracking (though note them as WIP).

Thanks for the feedback! Don't worry about taking a bit longer, I know everyone must be busy.

Once I finish the events and do some follow ups, I will post an updated version.

⚧ Squark

Here's something I was thinking about since 1.9.5 and it concerns Lindsey Melkers.

"Lindsey Melkers Expansion idea, Wall of Text"
If you finish out her quest, she's a little sad about not being able keep her party balloons.
Each step in getting that far shreds her Stamina by -5 to the point where she can't even stand up any more so she collapses.
But when she returns to school, you can just reinflate her without consequence.

So what I was thinking (and this is pretty bare bones right now) was:
{PE Teacher} comes to the Principal's office after the second or third School Sports session (she'd still have difficulty Swimming) following Lindsey's return (so long as Lindsey shows up) expressing concern over Lindsey's apparent loss of athletic aptitude which coincided with her inexplicable breast growth. (it's worth noting each size increase shreds her Stamina by -5)
If the Gym is being used by Claire Fuzushi for the After School Parents thing, then a suggestion is made. The Fitness Centre. The player could then ask Donna Bolox (or whoever is in charge at the time) to help get Lindsey back into shape or do it themselves (Req: 75+ Player Stamina).
Donna would naturally be more effective but there would be less chance of events.
But it wouldn't just be the Fitness Centre. Once her Stamina starts to recover (+10 or so), we can take her jogging on the weekends. Setting this up would be a button event phone call.
Once her stamina climbs back to about 55-60 the player is given an option:
To end it as she now physically fit again OR to continue and increase her Stamina further.

The first option would naturally end the line. And enhancement drugs stop affecting her.
The second one, once she hits 75+ Stamina, would prompt some dialogue. Breast Designer must be unlocked. Requires Annette/Andy or someone in love with the Principal.
L: "{Sir/Miss}, I'm grateful for what you've done for me but I do still miss being the biggest girl in school."
P: "Well, Ms. Melkers, I still remember you collapsing from the rapidity of your increase."
L: "I think I can actually stand up with such fantastic breasts now!"
P: "I've come up with something that only takes a week to achieve the desired size."
L: "Gimme!"
P: "I could but won't your parents get suspicious?"
L: "They might. Though the hospital did only surgically reduce me and not treat the hormone imbalance they said I have."
P: "So you want me to deliberately cast shade on the hospital just for outsized breasts?"
L: "Medicine isn't perfect and accidents happen. Occasionally they miss things and surely you've heard to stories of them accidentally leaving tools INSIDE their patients."
P: "This much is true, I'll admit. So here's what I suggest:
I'll get you back to where you're happy but at a much slower rate. By the time you can't get any bigger it'll have been slow enough for people to accept."
L: "So a couple of weeks then?"
P: "At least. For people to accept your size, it must be a slow and gradual increase and not just a boobsplosion. We don't want the police involved. Do you like milk?"
L: "I guess. Why?"
P: "It's an old wives' tale that drinking lots of milk and sleeping more increases your chest size. So I propose we play into that. I'm going to shave down the drug I've created and you're going to do your part. But don't just go guzzling gallons of cow juice and turn into Rip Van Winkle. Just before you turn in to sleep each night, take one of these. Only one." (Item does not exist, it's kind of a MacGuffin).
L: "Sounds a little underhanded."
P: "Maybe. Though I do place my students' happiness above most other things. It won't help you swim though."
L: "Funny lady. Should I report like last time?"
P: "Yeah. I want to keep tabs on you. Y'know, for science."
L: (laughs) "Okay {Sir/Miss}, I'll do that."
P: "Although, there are days when I won't be here when you want to report. I'd appreciate a journal with measurements be kept and delivered - "
L: "I don't know where you live! And won't Ms. Hooter/Ms. Swan get suspicious?"
P: "Ms. Melkers, please don't cut across like that. Delivered to, as I was going to say, to {Annette/Andy/Lover}. If they ask, you will explain and that it must reach me as soon as possible. I don't require a full journal maybe just a page or two, symptoms, unusual heat, new size, anything strange; things like that."
L: "Oh, sorry {Sir/Miss}, I'm just excited, I guess. And I'll do that."
And she does. A new item will be given to the player but the character involved every second day until Lindsey hits size 10 again. In the pages, she practically gushes over her boobs (figuratively, not literally), including the information the Principal requested. This is actually an item that can be read and placed on the bookshelf.
Symptoms include: temporary lactation, seemingly too heavy, back problems, lack of bra sizes, knocking things over as she turns, difficulty swimming, short-term memory loss. (10% chance to report every time, but only one, not cumulative)
Effect of "Unusual heat": A sudden and temporary spike in fertility and arousal. (15% chance every time, non-cumulative)
Anything strange includes: Weird dreams, explosive lactation, nipples that fatten and shrink on their own, Paizuri addiction* (5% chance, non-cumulative)
*: Actually GIVING it, which the game does not currently support.
At this point, Lindsey should be fairly friendly with the Principal.
Something like this:

{PrincipalName},
Thank you again for doing this for me. I can't wait to slap (next biggest girl) across the face with my tits again! The nerve! Calling me flat-chested! (this might actually be an event) Soon though, she'll learn her place.
You know that since I started growing breasts, I've wanted them to get as big as possible and you're making my dream come true. And not just once but twice! How many other people can say that? Pretty soon, my boyfriend won't be able to keep his hands off me, just how I want it!
{Symptoms, if any occurred, follow}

Short-term memory loss:
... Huh, I DO have a boyfriend, right?
Suddenly I'm not sure. I'm worried now. I guess that's a symptom. I was hoping that this wouldn't happen.
Temporary lactation:
Something else happened. I woke up and my boobs were leaking. "Did someone knock me up in my sleep?" I wondered, but it stopped shortly after. Took a pregnancy test and everything. Nothing. I'm relieved.
Seemingly too heavy:
I'm having difficulty standing up today unless I hoist my melons with my hands. But they must weigh a tonne each! Okay, that's an exaggeration but they just so heavy, like huge and fleshy stones in my pockets. I hope I don't feel like this for too long.
Back problems (a follow on from Seemingly Too Heavy):
I'm still thinking something's wrong with the weight of my breasts. Only it got worse. Now I seem to have back problems. (the effect lasts two days, until the next letter arrives whereupon Seemingly Too Heavy also dissipates) They weight me down so much it actually hurts now. I'm going to finish this out and just lie down.
Lack of Bra sizes:
The Underwear store doesn't have anything that fits me any more and I can't go out without some kind of support! I wish I had two extra hands! The biggest they have feels like a compression band around me! Might have to get one online.
Knocking things over:
I can't turn around without bashing into the wall of knocking something over! I went to hug my mom and my breasts got in the way. Now she hugs me from behind.
Difficulty Swimming:
Well, it finally happened. Mr/Miss {Swimming Teacher Name} called them floatation devices. Probably trying to shame me into getting reductive surgery again. Joke's on {him/her}, though. I can still do the backstroke. And it's oddly easier now.

{Unusual Heat}
This morning I woke up randy as the brown antechinus. I was desperate for release. So I frigged myself every chance I got. Upon waking, between meals, sometimes during meals, in the shower, in the bath... You name it.
Even on the phone with my friends. Now some of them think I'm into them in that way.
If I got any dick, I'd probably be pregnant right now.

{Anything strange}
Dreams:
Well, I have something weird to tell you about. I had an odd dream the other night. My boobs wouldn't stop growing... Like in some of those cheap hentai rags. Not only that but my butt cheeks began to morph into breasts... With vagina nipples. What the fuck is wrong with me?

Explosive lactation:
I was getting dressed this morning when my mom walked in to see what was taking so long. Right then, my boobs opened fire - a stream of such force and volume I thought I might wind up dehydrated. Smack in the face. Instead of screaming and swearing blue murder, she just casually wiped her face down and swallowed some. Then just walked out. I dried up pretty quickly, thankfully. I don't want my clothes smelling of milk or becoming transparent or clingy.

Nipples fattening and shrinking:
Help me! Something is going badly wrong! My nipples are morphing of their own accord! All the time! It's so painful! I can't wear anything with this going on!

-----------------------------
You wanted measurements too right? Fair enough.

Previous size:
Current size:

~~Lindsey
[close]
----------------------------------------------------------------------------
That's basically what I had rolling around in my head. I'm open to other ideas and opinions as I really want to do something with what I consider a missed opportunity. I'm no good with possible images however and I just don't have to time to learn VEE coding.

Albatross

Quote from: squark on Nov 22, 2022, 05:06 PMHere's something I was thinking about since 1.9.5 and it concerns Lindsey Melkers.

"Lindsey Melkers Expansion idea, Wall of Text"
If you finish out her quest, she's a little sad about not being able keep her party balloons.
Each step in getting that far shreds her Stamina by -5 to the point where she can't even stand up any more so she collapses.
But when she returns to school, you can just reinflate her without consequence.

So what I was thinking (and this is pretty bare bones right now) was:
{PE Teacher} comes to the Principal's office after the second or third School Sports session (she'd still have difficulty Swimming) following Lindsey's return (so long as Lindsey shows up) expressing concern over Lindsey's apparent loss of athletic aptitude which coincided with her inexplicable breast growth. (it's worth noting each size increase shreds her Stamina by -5)
If the Gym is being used by Claire Fuzushi for the After School Parents thing, then a suggestion is made. The Fitness Centre. The player could then ask Donna Bolox (or whoever is in charge at the time) to help get Lindsey back into shape or do it themselves (Req: 75+ Player Stamina).
Donna would naturally be more effective but there would be less chance of events.
But it wouldn't just be the Fitness Centre. Once her Stamina starts to recover (+10 or so), we can take her jogging on the weekends. Setting this up would be a button event phone call.
Once her stamina climbs back to about 55-60 the player is given an option:
To end it as she now physically fit again OR to continue and increase her Stamina further.

The first option would naturally end the line. And enhancement drugs stop affecting her.
The second one, once she hits 75+ Stamina, would prompt some dialogue. Breast Designer must be unlocked. Requires Annette/Andy or someone in love with the Principal.
L: "{Sir/Miss}, I'm grateful for what you've done for me but I do still miss being the biggest girl in school."
P: "Well, Ms. Melkers, I still remember you collapsing from the rapidity of your increase."
L: "I think I can actually stand up with such fantastic breasts now!"
P: "I've come up with something that only takes a week to achieve the desired size."
L: "Gimme!"
P: "I could but won't your parents get suspicious?"
L: "They might. Though the hospital did only surgically reduce me and not treat the hormone imbalance they said I have."
P: "So you want me to deliberately cast shade on the hospital just for outsized breasts?"
L: "Medicine isn't perfect and accidents happen. Occasionally they miss things and surely you've heard to stories of them accidentally leaving tools INSIDE their patients."
P: "This much is true, I'll admit. So here's what I suggest:
I'll get you back to where you're happy but at a much slower rate. By the time you can't get any bigger it'll have been slow enough for people to accept."
L: "So a couple of weeks then?"
P: "At least. For people to accept your size, it must be a slow and gradual increase and not just a boobsplosion. We don't want the police involved. Do you like milk?"
L: "I guess. Why?"
P: "It's an old wives' tale that drinking lots of milk and sleeping more increases your chest size. So I propose we play into that. I'm going to shave down the drug I've created and you're going to do your part. But don't just go guzzling gallons of cow juice and turn into Rip Van Winkle. Just before you turn in to sleep each night, take one of these. Only one." (Item does not exist, it's kind of a MacGuffin).
L: "Sounds a little underhanded."
P: "Maybe. Though I do place my students' happiness above most other things. It won't help you swim though."
L: "Funny lady. Should I report like last time?"
P: "Yeah. I want to keep tabs on you. Y'know, for science."
L: (laughs) "Okay {Sir/Miss}, I'll do that."
P: "Although, there are days when I won't be here when you want to report. I'd appreciate a journal with measurements be kept and delivered - "
L: "I don't know where you live! And won't Ms. Hooter/Ms. Swan get suspicious?"
P: "Ms. Melkers, please don't cut across like that. Delivered to, as I was going to say, to {Annette/Andy/Lover}. If they ask, you will explain and that it must reach me as soon as possible. I don't require a full journal maybe just a page or two, symptoms, unusual heat, new size, anything strange; things like that."
L: "Oh, sorry {Sir/Miss}, I'm just excited, I guess. And I'll do that."
And she does. A new item will be given to the player but the character involved every second day until Lindsey hits size 10 again. In the pages, she practically gushes over her boobs (figuratively, not literally), including the information the Principal requested. This is actually an item that can be read and placed on the bookshelf.
Symptoms include: temporary lactation, seemingly too heavy, back problems, lack of bra sizes, knocking things over as she turns, difficulty swimming, short-term memory loss. (10% chance to report every time, but only one, not cumulative)
Effect of "Unusual heat": A sudden and temporary spike in fertility and arousal. (15% chance every time, non-cumulative)
Anything strange includes: Weird dreams, explosive lactation, nipples that fatten and shrink on their own, Paizuri addiction* (5% chance, non-cumulative)
*: Actually GIVING it, which the game does not currently support.
At this point, Lindsey should be fairly friendly with the Principal.
Something like this:

{PrincipalName},
Thank you again for doing this for me. I can't wait to slap (next biggest girl) across the face with my tits again! The nerve! Calling me flat-chested! (this might actually be an event) Soon though, she'll learn her place.
You know that since I started growing breasts, I've wanted them to get as big as possible and you're making my dream come true. And not just once but twice! How many other people can say that? Pretty soon, my boyfriend won't be able to keep his hands off me, just how I want it!
{Symptoms, if any occurred, follow}

Short-term memory loss:
... Huh, I DO have a boyfriend, right?
Suddenly I'm not sure. I'm worried now. I guess that's a symptom. I was hoping that this wouldn't happen.
Temporary lactation:
Something else happened. I woke up and my boobs were leaking. "Did someone knock me up in my sleep?" I wondered, but it stopped shortly after. Took a pregnancy test and everything. Nothing. I'm relieved.
Seemingly too heavy:
I'm having difficulty standing up today unless I hoist my melons with my hands. But they must weigh a tonne each! Okay, that's an exaggeration but they just so heavy, like huge and fleshy stones in my pockets. I hope I don't feel like this for too long.
Back problems (a follow on from Seemingly Too Heavy):
I'm still thinking something's wrong with the weight of my breasts. Only it got worse. Now I seem to have back problems. (the effect lasts two days, until the next letter arrives whereupon Seemingly Too Heavy also dissipates) They weight me down so much it actually hurts now. I'm going to finish this out and just lie down.
Lack of Bra sizes:
The Underwear store doesn't have anything that fits me any more and I can't go out without some kind of support! I wish I had two extra hands! The biggest they have feels like a compression band around me! Might have to get one online.
Knocking things over:
I can't turn around without bashing into the wall of knocking something over! I went to hug my mom and my breasts got in the way. Now she hugs me from behind.
Difficulty Swimming:
Well, it finally happened. Mr/Miss {Swimming Teacher Name} called them floatation devices. Probably trying to shame me into getting reductive surgery again. Joke's on {him/her}, though. I can still do the backstroke. And it's oddly easier now.

{Unusual Heat}
This morning I woke up randy as the brown antechinus. I was desperate for release. So I frigged myself every chance I got. Upon waking, between meals, sometimes during meals, in the shower, in the bath... You name it.
Even on the phone with my friends. Now some of them think I'm into them in that way.
If I got any dick, I'd probably be pregnant right now.

{Anything strange}
Dreams:
Well, I have something weird to tell you about. I had an odd dream the other night. My boobs wouldn't stop growing... Like in some of those cheap hentai rags. Not only that but my butt cheeks began to morph into breasts... With vagina nipples. What the fuck is wrong with me?

Explosive lactation:
I was getting dressed this morning when my mom walked in to see what was taking so long. Right then, my boobs opened fire - a stream of such force and volume I thought I might wind up dehydrated. Smack in the face. Instead of screaming and swearing blue murder, she just casually wiped her face down and swallowed some. Then just walked out. I dried up pretty quickly, thankfully. I don't want my clothes smelling of milk or becoming transparent or clingy.

Nipples fattening and shrinking:
Help me! Something is going badly wrong! My nipples are morphing of their own accord! All the time! It's so painful! I can't wear anything with this going on!

-----------------------------
You wanted measurements too right? Fair enough.

Previous size:
Current size:

~~Lindsey
[close]
----------------------------------------------------------------------------
That's basically what I had rolling around in my head. I'm open to other ideas and opinions as I really want to do something with what I consider a missed opportunity. I'm no good with possible images however and I just don't have to time to learn VEE coding.

I didn't even know she had a quest, how do you trigger it?

Zaiaku

#25
Quote from: Albatross on Dec 06, 2022, 04:11 AM
Quote from: squark on Nov 22, 2022, 05:06 PMHere's something I was thinking about since 1.9.5 and it concerns Lindsey Melkers.

"Lindsey Melkers Expansion idea, Wall of Text"
If you finish out her quest, she's a little sad about not being able keep her party balloons.
Each step in getting that far shreds her Stamina by -5 to the point where she can't even stand up any more so she collapses.
But when she returns to school, you can just reinflate her without consequence.

So what I was thinking (and this is pretty bare bones right now) was:
{PE Teacher} comes to the Principal's office after the second or third School Sports session (she'd still have difficulty Swimming) following Lindsey's return (so long as Lindsey shows up) expressing concern over Lindsey's apparent loss of athletic aptitude which coincided with her inexplicable breast growth. (it's worth noting each size increase shreds her Stamina by -5)
If the Gym is being used by Claire Fuzushi for the After School Parents thing, then a suggestion is made. The Fitness Centre. The player could then ask Donna Bolox (or whoever is in charge at the time) to help get Lindsey back into shape or do it themselves (Req: 75+ Player Stamina).
Donna would naturally be more effective but there would be less chance of events.
But it wouldn't just be the Fitness Centre. Once her Stamina starts to recover (+10 or so), we can take her jogging on the weekends. Setting this up would be a button event phone call.
Once her stamina climbs back to about 55-60 the player is given an option:
To end it as she now physically fit again OR to continue and increase her Stamina further.

The first option would naturally end the line. And enhancement drugs stop affecting her.
The second one, once she hits 75+ Stamina, would prompt some dialogue. Breast Designer must be unlocked. Requires Annette/Andy or someone in love with the Principal.
L: "{Sir/Miss}, I'm grateful for what you've done for me but I do still miss being the biggest girl in school."
P: "Well, Ms. Melkers, I still remember you collapsing from the rapidity of your increase."
L: "I think I can actually stand up with such fantastic breasts now!"
P: "I've come up with something that only takes a week to achieve the desired size."
L: "Gimme!"
P: "I could but won't your parents get suspicious?"
L: "They might. Though the hospital did only surgically reduce me and not treat the hormone imbalance they said I have."
P: "So you want me to deliberately cast shade on the hospital just for outsized breasts?"
L: "Medicine isn't perfect and accidents happen. Occasionally they miss things and surely you've heard to stories of them accidentally leaving tools INSIDE their patients."
P: "This much is true, I'll admit. So here's what I suggest:
I'll get you back to where you're happy but at a much slower rate. By the time you can't get any bigger it'll have been slow enough for people to accept."
L: "So a couple of weeks then?"
P: "At least. For people to accept your size, it must be a slow and gradual increase and not just a boobsplosion. We don't want the police involved. Do you like milk?"
L: "I guess. Why?"
P: "It's an old wives' tale that drinking lots of milk and sleeping more increases your chest size. So I propose we play into that. I'm going to shave down the drug I've created and you're going to do your part. But don't just go guzzling gallons of cow juice and turn into Rip Van Winkle. Just before you turn in to sleep each night, take one of these. Only one." (Item does not exist, it's kind of a MacGuffin).
L: "Sounds a little underhanded."
P: "Maybe. Though I do place my students' happiness above most other things. It won't help you swim though."
L: "Funny lady. Should I report like last time?"
P: "Yeah. I want to keep tabs on you. Y'know, for science."
L: (laughs) "Okay {Sir/Miss}, I'll do that."
P: "Although, there are days when I won't be here when you want to report. I'd appreciate a journal with measurements be kept and delivered - "
L: "I don't know where you live! And won't Ms. Hooter/Ms. Swan get suspicious?"
P: "Ms. Melkers, please don't cut across like that. Delivered to, as I was going to say, to {Annette/Andy/Lover}. If they ask, you will explain and that it must reach me as soon as possible. I don't require a full journal maybe just a page or two, symptoms, unusual heat, new size, anything strange; things like that."
L: "Oh, sorry {Sir/Miss}, I'm just excited, I guess. And I'll do that."
And she does. A new item will be given to the player but the character involved every second day until Lindsey hits size 10 again. In the pages, she practically gushes over her boobs (figuratively, not literally), including the information the Principal requested. This is actually an item that can be read and placed on the bookshelf.
Symptoms include: temporary lactation, seemingly too heavy, back problems, lack of bra sizes, knocking things over as she turns, difficulty swimming, short-term memory loss. (10% chance to report every time, but only one, not cumulative)
Effect of "Unusual heat": A sudden and temporary spike in fertility and arousal. (15% chance every time, non-cumulative)
Anything strange includes: Weird dreams, explosive lactation, nipples that fatten and shrink on their own, Paizuri addiction* (5% chance, non-cumulative)
*: Actually GIVING it, which the game does not currently support.
At this point, Lindsey should be fairly friendly with the Principal.
Something like this:

{PrincipalName},
Thank you again for doing this for me. I can't wait to slap (next biggest girl) across the face with my tits again! The nerve! Calling me flat-chested! (this might actually be an event) Soon though, she'll learn her place.
You know that since I started growing breasts, I've wanted them to get as big as possible and you're making my dream come true. And not just once but twice! How many other people can say that? Pretty soon, my boyfriend won't be able to keep his hands off me, just how I want it!
{Symptoms, if any occurred, follow}

Short-term memory loss:
... Huh, I DO have a boyfriend, right?
Suddenly I'm not sure. I'm worried now. I guess that's a symptom. I was hoping that this wouldn't happen.
Temporary lactation:
Something else happened. I woke up and my boobs were leaking. "Did someone knock me up in my sleep?" I wondered, but it stopped shortly after. Took a pregnancy test and everything. Nothing. I'm relieved.
Seemingly too heavy:
I'm having difficulty standing up today unless I hoist my melons with my hands. But they must weigh a tonne each! Okay, that's an exaggeration but they just so heavy, like huge and fleshy stones in my pockets. I hope I don't feel like this for too long.
Back problems (a follow on from Seemingly Too Heavy):
I'm still thinking something's wrong with the weight of my breasts. Only it got worse. Now I seem to have back problems. (the effect lasts two days, until the next letter arrives whereupon Seemingly Too Heavy also dissipates) They weight me down so much it actually hurts now. I'm going to finish this out and just lie down.
Lack of Bra sizes:
The Underwear store doesn't have anything that fits me any more and I can't go out without some kind of support! I wish I had two extra hands! The biggest they have feels like a compression band around me! Might have to get one online.
Knocking things over:
I can't turn around without bashing into the wall of knocking something over! I went to hug my mom and my breasts got in the way. Now she hugs me from behind.
Difficulty Swimming:
Well, it finally happened. Mr/Miss {Swimming Teacher Name} called them floatation devices. Probably trying to shame me into getting reductive surgery again. Joke's on {him/her}, though. I can still do the backstroke. And it's oddly easier now.

{Unusual Heat}
This morning I woke up randy as the brown antechinus. I was desperate for release. So I frigged myself every chance I got. Upon waking, between meals, sometimes during meals, in the shower, in the bath... You name it.
Even on the phone with my friends. Now some of them think I'm into them in that way.
If I got any dick, I'd probably be pregnant right now.

{Anything strange}
Dreams:
Well, I have something weird to tell you about. I had an odd dream the other night. My boobs wouldn't stop growing... Like in some of those cheap hentai rags. Not only that but my butt cheeks began to morph into breasts... With vagina nipples. What the fuck is wrong with me?

Explosive lactation:
I was getting dressed this morning when my mom walked in to see what was taking so long. Right then, my boobs opened fire - a stream of such force and volume I thought I might wind up dehydrated. Smack in the face. Instead of screaming and swearing blue murder, she just casually wiped her face down and swallowed some. Then just walked out. I dried up pretty quickly, thankfully. I don't want my clothes smelling of milk or becoming transparent or clingy.

Nipples fattening and shrinking:
Help me! Something is going badly wrong! My nipples are morphing of their own accord! All the time! It's so painful! I can't wear anything with this going on!

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You wanted measurements too right? Fair enough.

Previous size:
Current size:

~~Lindsey
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That's basically what I had rolling around in my head. I'm open to other ideas and opinions as I really want to do something with what I consider a missed opportunity. I'm no good with possible images however and I just don't have to time to learn VEE coding.

I didn't even know she had a quest, how do you trigger it?

1. Open the Chem lab and read the chemistry book until you hit Chemistry skill 20 (DO NOT Debug, it will sequence break the event and make it unobtainable) and then advance your chemistry skill until you can make the breast enlarger drug and make it.

2. Go to the onsen, If playing as a male, make sure the Nature's Way Law is passed in order to go into the women's changing room. Lindsey should be there and an event should play asking you if you made the drug, answer yes obviously.

3. Next school day, go into your office and the event should play. If it doesn't, just wait until it does.

4. To continue advancing the event, keep developing the Breast Enlarger drug by one stage and then go to your office one week since last you saw Lindsey, the Breast Designer is not necessary. Repeat until she winds up in the hospital and that's the end of the chain.
Corrupting Students since 2006

Albatross

Ah right I remember it now, I've got it before but I guess I missed it in my last few runs since I debugged.

⚧ Squark

I put it up here in the hope I might get some feedback. I'm open to ideas. As I've already said, I don't currently have the time to get to grips with VEE code.
Anybody?

barteke22Topic starter

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QuoteIf you finish out her quest, she's a little sad about not being able keep her party balloons.
Each step in getting that far shreds her Stamina by -5 to the point where she can't even stand up any more so she collapses.
But when she returns to school, you can just reinflate her without consequence.

So what I was thinking (and this is pretty bare bones right now) was:
{PE Teacher} comes to the Principal's office after the second or third School Sports session (she'd still have difficulty Swimming) following Lindsey's return (so long as Lindsey shows up) expressing concern over Lindsey's apparent loss of athletic aptitude which coincided with her inexplicable breast growth. (it's worth noting each size increase shreds her Stamina by -5)
If the Gym is being used by Claire Fuzushi for the After School Parents thing, then a suggestion is made. The Fitness Centre. The player could then ask Donna Bolox (or whoever is in charge at the time) to help get Lindsey back into shape or do it themselves (Req: 75+ Player Stamina).
Donna would naturally be more effective but there would be less chance of events.
But it wouldn't just be the Fitness Centre. Once her Stamina starts to recover (+10 or so), we can take her jogging on the weekends. Setting this up would be a button event phone call.
Once her stamina climbs back to about 55-60 the player is given an option:
To end it as she now physically fit again OR to continue and increase her Stamina further.
Claire's gym thingie is not physically a thing (and unlikely to become a thing any time soon). And while there's ways to check if it exists - probably don't want to make it too involved unless you want to actually make it a thing for this chain (also expanding Claire's). Though just mentioning it should be okay.


QuoteThe first option would naturally end the line. And enhancement drugs stop affecting her.
The second one, once she hits 75+ Stamina, would prompt some dialogue. Breast Designer must be unlocked. Requires Annette/Andy or someone in love with the Principal.

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And she does. A new item will be given to the player but the character involved every second day until Lindsey hits size 10 again. In the pages, she practically gushes over her boobs (figuratively, not literally), including the information the Principal requested. This is actually an item that can be read and placed on the bookshelf.
Symptoms include: temporary lactation, seemingly too heavy, back problems, lack of bra sizes, knocking things over as she turns, difficulty swimming, short-term memory loss. (10% chance to report every time, but only one, not cumulative)
Effect of "Unusual heat": A sudden and temporary spike in fertility and arousal. (15% chance every time, non-cumulative)
Anything strange includes: Weird dreams, explosive lactation, nipples that fatten and shrink on their own, Paizuri addiction* (5% chance, non-cumulative)
*: Actually GIVING it, which the game does not currently support.
At this point, Lindsey should be fairly friendly with the Principal.
Temporary/permanent Stat/Bodysize changes can be handled via things like StatusEffects. There's also fetishes, which now can be added gradually (like 1-2 points per event etc.). Relevant fetishes could be Drugs, Lactation, BigBreasts, Nymphomania/Exhibitionism? Otherwise could also add Paizuri/Titjob as a new one.

Visual changes, aside from size/nude lactation, probably won't be an option. I'm working on my own PD system on the side, but that's still light years away. And the current would only really work with nude at best.


Quote(...)

Explosive lactation:
I was getting dressed this morning when my mom walked in to see what was taking so long. Right then, my boobs opened fire - a stream of such force and volume I thought I might wind up dehydrated. Smack in the face. Instead of screaming and swearing blue murder, she just casually wiped her face down and swallowed some. Then just walked out. I dried up pretty quickly, thankfully. I don't want my clothes smelling of milk or becoming transparent or clingy.

Nipples fattening and shrinking:
Help me! Something is going badly wrong! My nipples are morphing of their own accord! All the time! It's so painful! I can't wear anything with this going on!
The above reminded me of the idea I had for Lindsey long ago when I stumbled upon an image that looked a lot like her + gave off the same energy as her chain: A futa path (after the breast one). Started either by replacing the final drug ('to save her'/'side effect') with a futa maker, or some other excuse. Which would lead to her going down a similar path, except it goes better (maybe)? Then maybe goes on to join the Cooking Club to make use of her new 'talents'. It was just an idea, feel free to incorporate it into yours as an alt. route or expansion :D
Image
I tracked down the whole set (though it only comes in the 'massive' stage):
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QuoteThat's basically what I had rolling around in my head. I'm open to other ideas and opinions as I really want to do something with what I consider a missed opportunity. I'm no good with possible images however and I just don't have to time to learn VEE coding.
Seems like a pretty fun expansion. I don't really recall the details of the chain (last I played was like 1.7/1.8.4), but I imagine it'll need an overhaul to the new systems anyway (leading into this), so here's some other vague notes:

While we should definitely limit her to size 10 (to not reinvent logic for a single NPC), it's a bit weird that she's the only NPC that struggles when getting there (design wise she doesn't look weak). Not sure if a proper reason was given, though my head canon was that we either gave her an experimental (fast?) version of the drug, or she was trying to 'push it to 11', or perhaps some allergy. If no proper reason was given could perhaps work something like that in, and that 10.1 is the max for her ;) Not sure if the game even properly administers the drug to her, though that's unlikely as it would need the exact amount of doses (2? weeks each).  Do her breasts even shrink by the end, or do they stay at 10/whatever?

Also, even if you don't want to learn the programming part, I still highly recommend using VEE for the text itself. Not in any complex way, you can just use the canvas to leave comments and your text. The text preview allows you to see how it would look in game etc.
All you need for that is placing some String Variables and writing in them. Can also use Comment Boxes for describing how you want the event to work.  This allows me to copy the strings around + now also lets you confirm that tags work. Obviously no need to properly use the tags, but it helps (and the variable has a cheatsheet included in 'i'). No need to use gendered tags ({he} etc.) if the NPC can only be one gender for that text.
Example
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Alternatively use plain .txt, as programs like Word insert a bunch of unicode crap into the text.

As for images, there's tips on finding them in the contribution info link, can also ask in the discord thread for help with what's needed specifically. As always, gotta make do with 'close enough'.
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⚧ Squark

Thanks, barteke. This is exactly what I was hoping for. Even gave me some new ideas!
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Do her breasts even shrink by the end, or do they stay at 10?
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They shrink back down but not by a lot. The game auto-deflates them back to 8, I think.
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