For tracking of spelling mistakes, since that's a tad lower priority than game breaking bugs, and is easier to do in batch.
Ideally please provide a sample of the broken text and what's wrong with it. A longer sample will be more useful, as words like he/she often come from tags like {he} - so harder to search for.
Alternatively (if you know how to find those) could provide the filename and variable ID/line and what to fix instead of a sample.
How (any of these steps are fine):
- Write down the text you see (or provide a self-hosted screenshot). If you enable Show Event Name in Debug > Debug Events, you'll see those at the top.
- Find the text file and line by searching for the text in Notepad++ (Ctrl+Shift+F > point it to Events directory).
- Open event in VEE and search for the text in top right Filter > press Enter > Click the arrow > Click highlighted variable > note ID in top left.
Fixed:
- Up to (including) reply #35.
Fixed internally have a Like from Admin role.
Copy of TBBle's report (a great example of a useful report):
Typo in Computer Room\Panty Magic Start Node 36:
Quote"And, since panties pick up the essence of the wearer, they can be change another person."
Looks like "used to" is missing towards the end there.
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Typo in Classroom 2\00_GirlInTheaterClub Node 144
QuoteAs you enter the theater club, you're half wondering Ameli Coppers ended up joining this club...?
I don't know if that was supposed to be "wondering if", or perhaps "wondering how" or "wondering when". (Or "wondering why", which might make the most sense. I don't have the rest of the text in front me now to see what fits best)
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Also, I didn't check where, but the 'Birthday' chat dialog seems to be missing a space between the month and day.
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In Your Basement\MissingGirlsYourSlave, both of the inputs to node 357 are going to the same pin, but one is supposed to be the other (recording felatio vs cunniligus on training 6)
Also in this file, node 689 (the training-count Switch by Integer Range) has a <7 which should be <9. The problem is the 8th and 9th training will go to the 10-13 block, bypassing the "one of each" test for the 7-9 block.
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School/Gym/AmerliaSports has two typos: Node 21 first form of the first text shown in the event:
QuoteBut doesn't seem to have on right...?
Should be "have it on right", I think.
Node 129, the prepend to the observer effects text:
QuoteWhile she seems obvious it, she has an audience...
I think this is supposed to be "seems oblivious to it"?
This one happens when you successfully hypno a character with HasQuest:
"Would it effect other people more I wonder?"
This should be affect.
Affect is usually a verb, and it means to impact or change.
Effect, on the other hand, is usually a noun that you would use to indicate the result of a change.
Hypno impacts/changes the behaviour of anyone it works on. So, I think affect is a better fit here.
Also, it's missing a comma there between more and I; "Would it affect other people more, I wonder?"
You could also go with "Would it affect other people more? I wonder..."
Picobyte's report:
Spoiler
QuoteIn a description on the phone for PTA members in Notes on the Hooter family
* At the PTA meeting, she said her and her son..
should be
* At the PTA meeting, Susan said she and her son..
And if you're going to make changes here, maybe also these:
* Broke into their home, and found an incriminating of her hidden in her son's room.
(not really incriminating yet, IMO, and better without the comma after and)
* Broke into their home and found an immodest photo of Susan, hidden in her son's room.
And maybe:
* Feeling pretty sure an opportunity to make use of what I have will present itself. Just a matter of time.
* I'm pretty confident with this [material] an opportunity will eventually present itself. It's just a matter of time.
In Notes on Samantha Keller:
Hired Samantha and, based on her CV
better without the comma:
Hired Samantha and based on her CV
Has a seriousness about her, combined with a constantly smug expression. [..]
Has a seriousness about her, combined with an consistent smug expression.
In the Missing girl quest, the dialogue shown with the matches found behind the school also could be phrased better (sorry no suggestions, clicked it away already, by accident).
I've taken some liberties, as some of the suggestions weren't really improvements.
typo.png
\Events\Location\School\Office\LoanAcceptance.ve.xml
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\Events\Location\School\Swimming Pool\TannedStudent.ve.xml
Missing [/color]:
<Str>[color={PrincipalColor}]"Yes... I see clearly now how beautifully tanned you are!"
{First} smiles happily, and beams with a sense of bolstered self-confidence.
</Str>
\Events\Location\School\Classroom Shared\PussyAiring.ve.xml
PrincipalColor?
<Str>You walk into {G2_Name} and her friend kneeling on the desk, panties down.
{Name} looks over her shoulder and smiles at you...
[color={PrincipalColor}]"We realized our pussies got wet, so we hopped up here to let them dry." [/color]
It seems the policy is starting to change expectations, the girls are even starting to self-regulate...</Str>
Location\Onsen\Onsen Bath F\OnsenStudentShy
"(insert student name here) looks down at her exposes breasts with dismay."
That should be exposed.
Also on the same one (while not truly a typo) there's a double space between "something" and "a bit more...practical".
The last line uses too many commas. I'd suggest something a little more like this:
"Why wear the towel at all? If you got it, flaunt it."
You're called a man pretty early on in the new (1.10.0.3) goal selection at game start if you start as a Futa. I'll edit this post with the text sample later today.
Edit: Never mind, it was fixed already, dang
Letting your eyes rove over her body "Hello there Carmen... You look very nice in a bikini...! "... And I think, with body as good as yours, you would do justice to and even sexier bikini..."
should be "with a body", and "to and" should be "to an"
Later in the text "That's a little risqué isn't it...? Oh well... In for penny hey...?"
"Hold this for up around me... So I can change..."
Should be "In for a penny hey...?"
Also "Hold this up around me... So I can change..." is better
Also perhaps less ellipses...
From OnsenAdultLow event:
As you settle in across from her, {Name} looks embarrassed and pulls her towel open.
[color={Color}]"I'm so sorry, I know I shouldn't wear the towel the bath, I just forgot!"[/color]
should be a towel in the bath, the towel in the bath also works, but feels less natural. Either way, missing a word at least.
Edit: Deleted 2nd typo report, it was from the Futa mod.
In the General Sex Functions PDF (1.10.2.1) in the
EVENT: GetConsensualSexOps section
QuoteAccepted is returned is there are no Provisos.
1.10.2.2
- The NPC interaction info-tab "Statuses" list has "Bahavior change". (Typo is in NativeEvents\UI_Info_Panel_Tabs\00_MainTab.ve.xml thankfully, not in the database itself.)
- (Minor) When watching Sayako snuggle with her son-surrogate, after "a grown up version of her son,", there's a double-space. (ID 118 in Location\Your Home\Neighbor3.ve.xml). (I'm not super-keen on the use of "erm" here (both paths) but that's not really a typo issue.)
The status window has a very minor thing:
The Got condoms value is printed as Got comdoms.
Quote from: squark on Sep 08, 2022, 08:13 AMThe status window has a very minor thing:
The Got condoms value is printed as Got comdoms.
That appears to be from the Pregnancy mod.
Events\Location\School\Classroom Shared\Upskirt
You give a polite couch...
Should be cough.
Not sure if no-one saw this before, or if it's my english level but:
Events\Location\School\Office\HooterStart
In the first line of text it says:
"Seeing Ms. Hooter, it occurs that it'd handy if you could figure a way to win her support..."
Should be:
"Seeing Ms. Hooter, it occurs to you that it'd be handy (or helpful?) if you could figure a way to win her support..."
In the second parraf, second line:
"We are at that! and I'll let in on something....."
Should be:
"We are! And I'll let you in on something
In the third line:
"so, it pays to have good locks. Our locks aren't that good...."
Should be:
"So it pays to have good locks, our's aren't that good..."
- The last one is correct, she's talking about multiple locks - not just hers.
Quote from: TBBle on Sep 06, 2022, 03:47 PM1.10.2.2
- The NPC interaction info-tab "Statuses" list has "Bahavior change". (Typo is in NativeEvents\UI_Info_Panel_Tabs\00_MainTab.ve.xml thankfully, not in the database itself.)
- (Minor) When watching Sayako snuggle with her son-surrogate, after "a grown up version of her son,", there's a double-space. (ID 118 in Location\Your Home\Neighbor3.ve.xml). (I'm not super-keen on the use of "erm" here (both paths) but that's not really a typo issue.)
I can't comment on the first one there but I did run a search on the file itself, it returned no entries using "Bahavior Change".
The second one has been changed and now reads:
<Str>You sneak around the side of her house, and peeking in the window you see Sayoko and one of your students, a grown up version of her son, uh, snuggling...</Str>You should upgrade to 1.10.3.2.
Therein I also have an issue. That issue is this:
, and. This structure is just wrong.
That comma should not be there.
Quote from: kenshuck on Oct 07, 2022, 05:01 PM- The last one is correct, she's talking about multiple locks - not just hers.
Looked at it (like I say I'm learning and wanted to know) and it should be Our's (from a dictionary: You use ours to refer to something that belongs or relates both to yourself and to one or more other people.) Maybe both are correct? don't know, at this point it's more curiosity than anything else.
I tought that the structure shouldn't be that different from spanish (we usually don't repeat the same word in a phrase, less so if we are talking about something in specific)
Edit: yeah I know, it's going a little outside topic, but it's still related (?
Quote from: kenshuck on Oct 08, 2022, 03:10 PMQuote from: kenshuck on Oct 07, 2022, 05:01 PM- The last one is correct, she's talking about multiple locks - not just hers.
Looked at it (like I say I'm learning and wanted to know) and it should be Our's (from a dictionary: You use ours to refer to something that belongs or relates both to yourself and to one or more other people.) Maybe both are correct? don't know, at this point it's more curiosity than anything else.
I tought that the structure shouldn't be that different from spanish (we usually don't repeat the same word in a phrase, less so if we are talking about something in specific)
Edit: yeah I know, it's going a little outside topic, but it's still related (?
Sorry, but "Our's" is actually grammatically incorrect. The O should not be capitalised and the apostrophe is in error. The way it is with that apostrophe turns it into "our has" or "our is". So "ours" is fine. Same thing with the term "yours".
I acknowledge that independent possessive pronouns such as "ours" can be tricky for non-native speakers, however.
Quote from: squark on Oct 08, 2022, 04:05 PMSorry, but "Our's" is actually grammatically incorrect. The O should not be capitalised and the apostrophe is in error. The way it is with that apostrophe turns it into "our has" or "our is". So "ours" is fine. Same thing with the term "yours".
I acknowledge that independent possessive pronouns such as "ours" can be tricky for non-native speakers, however.
Yeah I knew that (ours without the apostrophe) it's just the damn custom from almost all possesives having It, I also almost always confuse is AND has :(
Edit: it's just a terrible idea to write in another language with the mobile corrector on 😡
./Events/Location/Changing Room Shared/BrokenSwimsuit.ve.xml
{His} eyes light up[color={Color}] "Thank you {PrincipalMr}
{PrinciaplLast}. They're great!"[/color]
./Events/Location/School/Library/LibraryRandom.ve.xml
{Name} is getting a quick 'reward' for getting a question right.
You're not sure if {P2_Name} bothered asking first...
But {P2_First}'s tongue is talented enough, that it probably doesn't matter anymore.
Spoiler
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HHS+1.10.3.5-Release\Schools\NormalSchool\Events\Location\Shopping Mall\SherilynSarahMeetup.ve.xml
[color={P2_Color}]"I would say I like a variety of movies,"[/color] {P2_Color} says, [color={P2_Color}]"Action, Drama, and Mystery are up there though."[/color]
HHS+1.10.3.5-Release\Schools\NormalSchool\Events\ExtensionLibrary\Smartphone\Journal\Clubs\Club_ReligiousStudies.ve.xml
<Str>
• Agreed to let them run a Snack Bar (as long as they cover the club's running costs).</Str>
I think principal agreed on something else.
HHS+1.10.3.5-Release\Schools\NormalSchool\Events\Location\School\Classroom Shared\Upskirt.ve.xml
<SeqVar_String>
<ID>338</ID>
<Coords>
<X>2029</X>
<Y>2458</Y>
</Coords>
<Str>{Name} has walked full into {Fem2_Name} sending them both tumbling to the floor.
Spoiler
(https://i.postimg.cc/9QxFDrJZ/double-kendall.png)
PersonAttachedEvents\Principal\UnderwoodQuest\UnderwoodBadEnd.ve.xmlGrim
You're just walking along, minding your own business, when something solid hits you hard in the back head.
There's a missing "of the" after "back".
Also, there's a missing . after the word "ruined" later in the text.
PersonAttachedEvents\ClaireFuzushi\ParentGymClub.ve.xml has a two very small typos:
"Well, I like to used the gym hall..."
Should be "I'd like to use the gym hall..."
Here's another one (maybe two) and I'm going to use the Student's name to minimise confusion.
Location\School\Classroom Shared\RainSoaked.ve.xml
"Alea Roberts nearly bumps into as she comes in the door."
There's a missing "you" after "bumps into" and personally I feel that "comes through the door" is just a little better.
1.10.3.5
\Schools\NormalSchool\SchoolSubjects\English.xml
<Description>English at senior high encompasses not only the basics, but also explores poetry and public speaking. As a result,
atudents become more persuasive in their everyday conversations.
1.10.3.5
\Schools\NormalSchool\Events\Location\Park\HypnosisPractice.ve.xml
"{Color}" is used instead of "{PrincipalColor}". For example:
<Str>Gently raising her up off your lap[color={Color}][i] "You'll be more comfortable sitting on my lap..."[/i][/color]
Unresisting, she follows your guiding hands[color=LightPink] "Yaawwn... I... Ok..."[/color] Rising up, then sitting back down on your lap...
Gently bringing your hands around her[color={Color}][i] "Such a warm day... You'll be more comfortable with your shirt undone... Let me help you..."[/i][/color]
Wriggling a little[color=LightPink] "Ohhh...? It is warm... Ok..."[/color]
[pagebreak]
Opening her shirt, you wrap your hands around her pert young breasts[color={Color}][i] "Such a lovely day..."
"... You feel aroused, and want someone to play with you... Here... I will help..."[/i][/color]
Wriggling again[color=LightPink] "Ohhh...? Yesss... Please... I mean thank you..."[/color]
Gently kneading each breasts, and pinching her nipples to a nice firmness[color=LightPink] "Hmmm... Ohhhh... Yesss..."[/color]
[pagebreak]
Figuring you could have your way with her, but deciding that's enough for now[color={Color}][i] "I'll be going now... I'll let you get back to your play..."[/i][/color]
As you walk away, the bewildered girl starts pulling her top back into place...</Str>
Expanding on the above, "Gently kneading each breasts" is also a typo.
Either of the following would be acceptable:
Gently kneading each breast
Gently kneading her breasts
Then there's Figuring you could have your way with her, but deciding that's enough for now
As I think there's a missing . after "now", a line break or even a colon.
Something more like this:
You figure you could have your way with her but decide that that's enough for now.
I'll be going now... I'll let you get back to your play..."
It might be correct overall but it just looks clumsy to me.
Calendar Entries:
- "First PTA meeting: Your meeting room. 4:00 am pm. (LS)
- "Inspect Chem Lab after 6:00 am am - ground floor, East hall, chemistry class"
"Unfortunately, a neighbour had seen you sneaking around before, and now sees sneaking out!"
now sees you sneaking out
In Principle's Office>Paperwork>Work on paperwork
QuoteYou sit down and prepare to do some paperwork in for the next hour or so.
What do decide to focus on?
omit "in" from first sentence
add "you" between "do" and "decide" to make it "What do you decide to focus on?"
>Update the teacher's manual
QuoteIt's a daunting task, but knowing it will help your teachers improve the quality of their lessons, keeps you motivated through the process.
omit comma (,) between "lessons" and "keeps"
>Work on the accounts
QuoteYou work through all the accounts, attempting to find any manor savings you can.
It's a daunting task, but in the end you manage to find some savings that will have a direct on the bottom line.
change "manor" to "minor"
add "effect" after "direct" to make it "direct effect on the bottom line."
Quote from: dalzomo on Mar 16, 2023, 03:51 AM>Work on the accounts
QuoteYou work through all the accounts, attempting to find any manor savings you can.
bottom line.
change "manor" to "minor"
Also omit "you can". The sentence is complete without it.
Quote from: oratorio on Mar 16, 2023, 01:54 PMQuote from: dalzomo on Mar 16, 2023, 03:51 AM>Work on the accounts
QuoteYou work through all the accounts, attempting to find any manor savings you can.
bottom line.
change "manor" to "minor"
Also omit "you can". The sentence is complete without it.
An even terser version: "You work through the accounts to find any savings." The additional words (including "you can") add nuance and emphasis even if they don't change the primary meaning.
peeping event in clothing shop
"you also now it won't eliminate it!"
now > know
Random event in class.
./NormalSchool/Events/Location/School/Classroom Shared/BentOver.ve.xml
"I keep seeing people staring it me when I bend over..."
Maybe "staring at me"
./Schools/NormalSchool/Events/Location/School/Gym/RopeWalk.ve.xml
"Especially if they're first up like {First} here, and the rope is still dry. But... I find a little encouragement sorts that out!"[/color]</Str>
First is teacher. Second is student. Teacher is talking about student.
Location/Park/Pickpocket
Ask {him} to shows you some tricks
I'm not sure if this is deliberate. But anyway, there are two ways of expressing this without the (in my opinion) errant s in shows.
Ask {him} to show you some tricks.
Or
Ask that {he} show you some tricks.
1.10.5.3
Oder regular shipping for Carl.
./NormalSchool/Events/FunctionLibrary/Population/ChatHobbiesByArchetype.ve.xml
<Name>I belive in the supernatural and destiny. You know... spirits, auras, astrology, fortunetelling. I just have a connection to these things.</Name>
./NormalSchool/Events/Location/School/Cafeteria/FoodDruggingAdministration.ve.xml
As {he} passes by {P2_Name}, {he} pauses for a moment, and then reaches out to grab {P2_his} {P2_Gender:ass|tits}, smiling wickedly.</Str>
Same for next screen in event. "Lewis gasps loudly as he gropes him."
Lewis Werner - he
Letitia Nickonsen - her
First NPC is female. I would suspect that Letitia dragged Lewis out of cafeteria and not Lewis dragged himself out.
Spoiler
(https://i.postimg.cc/ncz6hSd5/him-and-him.png) (https://postimages.org/)
same for other variations in same event. Events assume that P1 is male.
Text was fine (aside from another minor typo of drop vs drops). Context was just setting the same NPC to p1 and p2.
first office meeting with Sierra
[color} you say.
./NormalSchool/Events/Location/School/Classroom Shared/GangbangGirlByFutas.ve.xml
After all, she's certainly not saying No. And she is whimpering is post orgasm pleasure...</Str>
./NormalSchool/Events/Location/School/Rooftop/RoofRelief.ve.xml
<Str>{Name} is clearly in a hurry to orgasn, panties pulled aside and a vibrator to speed things up.
./Schools/NormalSchool/Events/PersonAttachedEvents/RaymundChain/Sherilyn_Encounters.ve.xml
<Str>Looks like they're in the middle of an argument. {if=({var:KnownSexLevel} > 2);then=[color=\{Color\}]"I mean it! I'm sure you'll grow to enjoy if it you just give it a try!"[/color]
There are many instances of the phrase "it's course" in NormalSchool (and three times in Templates), as part of the phrases "run it's course" or "nature takes it's course". Those should be "its course", without the apostrophe.
Additionally, there are a few instances of the phrase, "letting nature takes it's course" which should be further modified to remove the S from "takes", making it "letting nature take its course".
There are many uses of the word "throws" when it should be "throes", as in the phrase "throes of passion."
BethManiliStudy.ve.xml
Line 3335: Soon she is the throws of an intense orgasmshould also add the word "in", to make it "Soon she is in the throes of an intense orgasm"
DetentionFingering.ve.xml
Line 1840: throws of climax
Line 1860: throws of climaxLockerGirl.ve.xml
Line 1352: throws of an orgasm.SmithBlackmailRoom7.ve.xml
Line 7740: throws of ecstasy...YuriSex.ve.xml
Line 1641: throws of their orgasms, you're attention's drawn to an audible gasp behind you.should also change "you're" to "your" (and maybe also separate "attention's" into "attention is") to make it "throes of their orgasms, your attention is drawn to an audible gasp behind you."
ParkerLateToClass.ve.xml
Line 3889: throws of her climaxPOOActivities.ve.xml
Line 7942: throws of her own orgasmParkerTrain.ve.xml
Line 5761: throws of an orgasm.Tutor Hana.ve.xml
Line 5585: throws of her own orgasmTutor June.ve.xml
Line 3832: throws of another mutual orgasm.Tutor Rie.ve.xml
Line 7652: Still in the throws of her climax, she skittles forwardalso, "skittles"? maybe the writer meant "skitters", though "scooches" would be less insect imagery invoking
Line 7744: throws of an orgasm.
Line 7841: When the throws of pleasure
Line 7902: throws of climax...
Line 7919: Still in the throws of her climax
Line 7991: throws of an orgasm.Visit_PeterToy.ve.xml
Line 7725: throws of juvenile bliss
Found while hunting for "throws" misuses
DildoPlay.ve.xml
Line 4435: flicks her her dildo up to max.Remove one of those instances of "her"
WrestlingClubParticipation.ve.xml
Line 5645: "The rules are simples, we simply needs to put the other on the floorI don't know if that "needs" is supposed to be the vernacular of the speaker or a typo. If a typo, it should be "need"
DareGame1.ve.xml
Line 1933: The she throws the pantiesRemove "The", capitalize "She"
That's a lot of orgasm throwing.
./NormalSchool/Events/Location/School/Classroom Shared/CoolOffStrip.ve.xml
<Str>Some girls make love to boys, some girls make love to a camera... but {Name} is making love to to fan.
I don't if this one was already reported in the Sierra Hardman quest, the first blowjob/handjob you read "the sight of your cock seems to memorize her"
I'm guessing it's "mesmerize her".
Quote from: nemo777 on Jul 08, 2023, 08:47 PMI don't if this one was already reported in the Sierra Hardman quest, the first blowjob/handjob you read "the sight of your cock seems to memorize her"
I'm guessing it's "mesmerize her".
Or maybe it's your cock that memorises her. H-Game protags tend to have their brains in their dicks, after all.
Quote from: ⚧ Squark on Jul 08, 2023, 09:31 PMQuote from: nemo777 on Jul 08, 2023, 08:47 PMI don't if this one was already reported in the Sierra Hardman quest, the first blowjob/handjob you read "the sight of your cock seems to memorize her"
I'm guessing it's "mesmerize her".
Or maybe it's your cock that memorises her. H-Game protags tend to have their brains in their dicks, after all.
she won't be forgotten ^^
FunctionLibrary\PCGeneralSex\TextMakers\Fingering_Text Node 338: (Futa mutual vaginal fingering path)
QuoteAs the words leave {his} lips, {Gender:a solid load of cum shoots from his engorged cock|wetness gushes from her throbbing pussy|a think load of cum shoots from his engorged cock}.
That last "his" should be "her", as that's the futa text. Currently it produces:
QuoteAs the words leave her lips, a think load of cum shoots from his engorged cock.
Also, "think" is probably supposed to be "thick". Unless futaism comes with both hypersexuality (per an event with Karin)
and self-aware semen.
A mild one (and I didn't check exactly where) but the new "Personality description" text for flirting in at least one case (but not all cases) ends up with two newlines before it. I suspect the extra newline is in the "how the target feels" description, not the personality description. I
think it was one of the "uninterested" descriptions. Before the new "personality description" was added, they wouldn't have mattered.
Edit: Got it. Index 3 of node 47 in
Interactions\Relationship\Flirt has a trailing newline, and the others don't.
Location\Your Home\Tutor Rie node 505:
Continuing your kisses, you move over her lips, her chin, her throat, and down until you kiss first one, then the other of her nipples.
As her ripe young nipples blossom under your oral caresses, you run your hand down and around her thigh.
She mews very quietly[color={Color}] "{PrincipalGender:mister|miss} {PrincipalLast}... are we... are we going the whole way...? "[/color]
Responding with equal quietness[color={PrincipalColor}] "only if that's what you want Rie... only if that's what you want..."[/color]
[pagebreak]
Her eyes move to {PrincipalGender:gaze at the throbbing hardness pushing at your pants|gaze at your breasts longingly|gaze first at your full breasts, then at the throbbing hardness pushing at your pants}.
[color={Color}]"i think so {PrincipalGender:mister|miss} {PrincipalLast}... yes... i think so..."[/color]
And you know she's ready to proceed... Albeit still unsure of where this will all end up.
Has three lines that use a lower-case letter at the start of the speech-act ("{PrincipalGender:mister|miss}","only", and "i think so"), that I believe should be captialised. The other text in this event (in an incomplete check) capitalised such cases too.
Extraneous newline in the last sentence of
Location\School\Classroom Shared\DaisySpied, node 406:
QuoteYou dart out the opposite way and it's not until you've locked the door to your office behind you that you
finally come while fantasizing about Daisy Maddox in a sexier uniform - maybe a miniskirt could get past the PTA?
Location\School\Classroom Shared\MathPerverted node 46 appears to be doing needless pronoun substitution, given it's on a track which is already male-student only. The other two possible text blocks for this path don't do have these substitutions.
{Mr} {Last} has decided to mix up today's math class by making the students act as the objects to be measured.
Today it seems to be the {Gender:boys||futa}' turn, and they are having to let their fellow students measure their dicks.
One of {boy}s has gotten one of the fashion-focused girls to measure {him}.
{He} can't help but get hard, which thankfully was needed. Though, even if it wasn't you doubt the girl would complain with how big {he} is.
At this point, the Person-Context Dictionary is pointing at the teacher (Beth Manili in this case), producing:
QuoteMiss Manili has decided to mix up today's math class by making the students act as the objects to be measured.
Today it seems to be the ' turn, and they are having to let their fellow students measure their dicks.
One of girls has gotten one of the fashion-focused girls to measure her.
She can't help but get hard, which thankfully was needed. Though, even if it wasn't you doubt the girl would complain with how big she is.
(Note that the
Gender: substitution on the second line is producing nothing. I bolded the other incorrect substitutions that used the teacher's gender instead of the male student.
I'm guessing at some point futa students were able to go down this path, but currently they go down the same path as female students.
Location\School\Principal Office\SandraTitsbigMeeting node 99 implies that the period for triggering the
Location\Titsbig\Floor\SandraTitsbigTherapy is 16:00 - 21:00. (Or 22:00, the wording's unclear, I suspect that is supposed to be "finish by", since the session is an hour long, or maybe that's supposed to be her work-finish times?) However, both the event and the Smartphone diary give "Whenever she's home between 15:00 and 22:00." as the possible range.
Location\School\Ward\Measurement_Male node 125 has a needless sentence break.
QuoteOfficially it's to ensure that any school-issued sports equipment that would be on his groin.
Such as a speedo, or jockstrap with a cup would be the proper size and not cause him any discomfort or immodesty.
That's all one sentence. (I'm also not overly fond of the number of hard-breaks in the middle of sentences, nor of the one-sentence-per-paragraph style, as they end up using like half the text-box width at 16:9, and hence often introducing needless scrolling. But that's a wider issue than the typo thread. Like that full-screen text overly in that one quest, there's a style-consistency discussion to be had, and alignment work to be done by someone.)
Location\School\Principal Office\BellStrip node 278 has both missing words and badly-worded choices.
QuoteWhen you feel your orgasm rising, you briefly consider her request that you give her a/some warning.
But what do you decide...?
The choices are "Yes" or "No", but that's not really a yes/no question. They would read much better as "Warn her", "Don't warn her". Otherwise the question could be instead written as "Do you decide to warn her?" or similar that is explicitly yes/no.
Quote from: TBBle on Aug 07, 2023, 12:12 PM...
Fixed, along with 30+ permutations of those typos.
Except the newline mid sentence, as while I don't quite like/follow that part of the style guide myself, it's part of what was decided upon.
Re: Style guide. As per event contrib guide, the style that was decided upon prior to 1.9 is as follows:
- Max 4 lines (with linebreaks between, so 7 lines) per text box (or paragraphstop).
- Each line up to like 50-60% of the 1080p width.
-- Inserting newlines if the sentence can't be shorter.
I've always followed a similar style for my stuff.
- Except up to 80-95% of the 1080p width if need be (no newline mid sentence).
- And no line limit in config explanations, people can scroll if they need info on a specific menu item.
Fair 'nuff, I wasn't aware of the style guide. Those rules seem fine, the only places where the mid-sentence newline and very limited text width is problematic is when it introduces scrolling that otherwise wouldn't happen, and your style guide extract suggests that these should be split into separate text boxes, so that's still a solution. (Although I guess that doesn't count as a typo, so I won't report any such cases here. ^_^)
Events\ExtensionLibrary\GameHelp\Intro2_LydiasSchoolTour.ve.xml, ID: 163
QuoteStepping out into the street once more, and you encounter a rather attractive young {man}...
...
[color={PrincipalColor}]"Well in that case... Thank you Mrs {Last}..."[/color]
[color={Color}]"Actually, it's {Mr}. And there's no need to thank me. Elaine Dickinson, of the Regional Schools Department, asked me to."[/color]
If the {man} template is applied, it means that it is possible that Lydia Swan may initially be a male. In this case, it looks strange that the main character addresses him as "Mrs.".
I propose to fix it this way:
Quote[color={PrincipalColor}]"Well in that case... Thank you {Gender:Mr|Mrs} {Last}..."[/color]
[color={Color}]"{Gender:T|Actually, it's Miss. And t}here's no need to thank me. Elaine Dickinson, of the Regional Schools Department, asked me to."[/color]
Same with ID: 217
Quote[color={PrincipalColor}]"Why, thank you Miss {Last}... You're a gem!"[/color]
Events\Location\School\Principal Office\SierraHardmanMeetings.ve.xml:
ID: 75 & ID: 83
Quote[color={Color}]"Okay then,"[/color she says before walking away.
ID: 18
Quote[color={Color}]"Oh thank you sir!"[/color] she says.
[color={PrincipalColor}]"And since she is already aware of it, I'm not gonna bother letting her know about this incident,[/color] you say.
ID: 56
Quote[color={Color}]"Thank you so much Ma'am![/color] she says before hugging you.
Events\ExtensionLibrary\GameHelp\Intro3_LydiasMgtInsights.ve.xml, ID: 29
Lydia says:
Quote[color={Color}]"Well, you see... Elaine asked me to avoid getting into details at this stage. {He} said she wanted you to start with a clean slate."
Who is "{He}"? Is Lydia referring to herself in the third person? =)
Items\Drinks\Large Bottle of Beer.xml
QuoteA large botte of your favorite beer.
Events\FunctionLibrary\MiscChainSpecific\CustomMinigames\Chemistry.ve.xml, ID: 133
phosphoroyl nitride > phosphoryl nitride
By VEE inspection only: PersonAttachedEvents\RaymundChain\Sherilyn_Chain, node 193 has one literal "Sherilyn" instead of a context substitution. Won't be visible as a typo unless Sherilyn's name changes.
Panty raid in girls' locker room during morning cheerleader practice
"The again,"
should be "Then again,"
1.10.6.0 with GPCC, Indicators & Difficulty, both PD_Sys, and Visible Slave Collar mods.
Location\School\Principal Office\SierraHardmanSex node 371 line 11:
Quote"It's been getting harder than getting better actually..."
Perhaps that should be "It's been getting harder
rather than getting better actually..."?
(Alternatively, "It's been getting harder
then getting better actually..." but that's just how a penis works, so her worry would be unfounded.)
Also, I thought this was already bug-reported... This path ends with "I want you to meet me back here tomorrow" but she won't come
in to your office by herself anymore, you need to call her to your office to progress this event. So maybe in node 380 on the last line,
Quote"I want you to meet me back here tomorrow, so I can help you a bit more,"
could be "I
will call you back here tomorrow, so I can help you a bit more," to make clear that the player needs to act. This sets up the next stage, which is all player-driven.
Location\School\Principal Office\SierraHardmanSex nodes 1100 and 1102 (Blowjob - Willing) make references to "fixing" Sierra, even though I'm on the "Stay Futa" path. It's only the Futa and Female MCs paths that hit these nodes, looks like an overlooked cut-and-paste error from the "Cure" route (nodes 186 and 190). Every other path in this block makes reference to "satisfying you" instead, including the Male path.
The calendar entry for the town steering committee meeting (and maybe the dialog where you are invited) says the meeting happens the last Saturday of the month, but the meeting is happening Sunday Feb 28.
./NormalSchool/Events/Location/School/Classroom Shared/BentOver.ve.xml
You consider a moment [color={PrincipalColor}]"Both have merits. Mystery is sexy, but so is exposure, I wouldn't worry aobut it."[/color]</Str>
This is technically not a typo but the PI says this when you pick up the Hypnosis for Teachers book (I don't have Show Event Name enabled at the moment):
"... Explains why his subsequent stuff was just dribble, doesn't it!"
Personally I feel that in the context meant here, drivel fits better than dribble.
Drivel (noun): Nonsense.