[TBBle]

By VEE inspection only: PersonAttachedEvents\RaymundChain\Sherilyn_Chain, node 193 has one literal "Sherilyn" instead of a context substitution. Won't be visible as a typo unless Sherilyn's name changes.

[dalzomo]

Panty raid in girls' locker room during morning cheerleader practice

"The again,"

should be "Then again,"

[TBBle]

1.10.6.0 with GPCC, Indicators & Difficulty, both PD_Sys, and Visible Slave Collar mods.


Location\School\Principal Office\SierraHardmanSex node 371 line 11:

"It's been getting harder than getting better actually..."

Perhaps that should be "It's been getting harder rather than getting better actually..."?

(Alternatively, "It's been getting harder then getting better actually..." but that's just how a penis works, so her worry would be unfounded.)

Also, I thought this was already bug-reported... This path ends with "I want you to meet me back here tomorrow" but she won't come in to your office by herself anymore, you need to call her to your office to progress this event. So maybe in node 380 on the last line,

"I want you to meet me back here tomorrow, so I can help you a bit more,"

could be "I will call you back here tomorrow, so I can help you a bit more," to make clear that the player needs to act. This sets up the next stage, which is all player-driven.


Location\School\Principal Office\SierraHardmanSex nodes 1100 and 1102 (Blowjob - Willing) make references to "fixing" Sierra, even though I'm on the "Stay Futa" path. It's only the Futa and Female MCs paths that hit these nodes, looks like an overlooked cut-and-paste error from the "Cure" route (nodes 186 and 190). Every other path in this block makes reference to "satisfying you" instead, including the Male path.

[dcsobral]

The calendar entry for the town steering committee meeting (and maybe the dialog where you are invited) says the meeting happens the last Saturday of the month, but the meeting is happening Sunday Feb 28.

[Dzeris]

./NormalSchool/Events/Location/School/Classroom Shared/BentOver.ve.xml

You consider a moment [color={PrincipalColor}]"Both have merits.  Mystery is sexy, but so is exposure, I wouldn't worry aobut it."[/color]</Str>

[⚧ Squark]

This is technically not a typo but the PI says this when you pick up the Hypnosis for Teachers book (I don't have Show Event Name enabled at the moment):
"... Explains why his subsequent stuff was just dribble, doesn't it!"
Personally I feel that in the context meant here, drivel fits better than dribble.
Drivel (noun): Nonsense.

[⚧ Squark]

[1.11.0.2]
FunctionLibrary\Smartphone\100_PhoneContact
The bottom option says "Opps". This should be "Oops".
https://ibb.co/4RZDh3Xh

(Sorry for the font face.)

I've since fixed it on my local copy but thought I should point it out.

Also:
ExtensionLibrary\Chat\FavorMiniquests\Miniquest_Movie
"To be honest, I'm a bit of a move addict..."
Should be movie.

[Dzeris]

1.11.0.7 Schools\NormalSchool\Events\Location\Beach\BeachGirls.ve.xml

"{Name} is here for the attention, not he sand and water."

    <SeqVar_String>
      <ID>308</ID>
      <Coords>
        <X>2719</X>
        <Y>6887</Y>
      </Coords>
      <Str>The girls at your school really do learn to flaunt themselves if they want attention.

And judging by how she is just posing rather then swimming, {Name} is here for the attention, not he sand and water.</Str>
      <UserFacing>True</UserFacing>
    </SeqVar_String>

[thi5i5ate5t]

After successfully hypnotizing a class for a beach trip:

Current: "New Found knowledge, of the power of suggestion, settles itself..."

Should be: "Newfound knowledge of the power of suggestion settles itself..."


Keller review:

"It's once time we reviewed your performance..." --> "It's once again time we reviewed your performance."

"Then of course... What'll it be this week?" --> "Then of course - what'll it be this week?"

(Honestly, just about every ellipsis in this event should be something else - a dash, a comma, a period, a semicolon, SOMETHING.  Otherwise it reads like the protagonist/narrator is a doddering 80-year-old forgetting the story as they tell it.)

"She quietly drops to her knees in front of you. Then opens your pants, and..." --> "...in front of you, then opens your pants and..."


Carmen Fan Club enrollment:
"The erm... tutoring club, runs from sixteen hundred and seventeen-thirty" --> "from sixteen hundred to seventeen-thirty"

I've seen a bunch more; I'll try to pay closer attention.

[thi5i5ate5t]

you know what, actually, is there a way to get a text dump without having to learn to use the debugger?  A lot of this punctuation is going to bother me if I'm paying attention to it and not able to actually DO anything with it in the heat of the moment; I'd be happy to fuck with a text file and return either a full edited copy or (if i can figure out how to make one) a diff.

[barteke22]

There's no export, but you can hit Shift+F12 any time you see a typo to breakpoint on the operation containing it (and use the Eye icon to jump to it).