[⚧ Squark]

The status window has a very minor thing:
The Got condoms value is printed as Got comdoms.

[Dagoth]

The status window has a very minor thing:
The Got condoms value is printed as Got comdoms.

That appears to be from the Pregnancy mod.

[⚧ Squark]

Events\Location\School\Classroom Shared\Upskirt
You give a polite couch...
Should be cough.

[kenshuck]

Not sure if no-one saw this before, or if it's my english level but:
Events\Location\School\Office\HooterStart

In the first line of text it says:
"Seeing Ms. Hooter, it occurs that it'd handy if you could figure a way to win her support..."
Should be:
"Seeing Ms. Hooter, it occurs to you that it'd be handy (or helpful?) if you could figure a way to win her support..."

In the second parraf, second line:
"We are at that! and I'll let in on something....."
Should be:
"We are! And I'll let you in on something
In the third line:
"so, it pays to have good locks. Our locks aren't that good...."
Should be:
"So it pays to have good locks, our's aren't that good..."

- The last one is correct, she's talking about multiple locks - not just hers.

[⚧ Squark]

1.10.2.2

• The NPC interaction info-tab "Statuses" list has "Bahavior change". (Typo is in NativeEvents\UI_Info_Panel_Tabs\00_MainTab.ve.xml thankfully, not in the database itself.)
  
• (Minor) When watching Sayako snuggle with her son-surrogate, after "a grown up version of her son,", there's a double-space. (ID 118 in Location\Your Home\Neighbor3.ve.xml). (I'm not super-keen on the use of "erm" here (both paths) but that's not really a typo issue.)
  

I can't comment on the first one there but I did run a search on the file itself, it returned no entries using "Bahavior Change".
The second one has been changed and now reads:
<Str>You sneak around the side of her house, and peeking in the window you see Sayoko and one of your students, a grown up version of her son, uh, snuggling...</Str>
You should upgrade to 1.10.3.2.
Therein I also have an issue. That issue is this: , and. This structure is just wrong.
That comma should not be there.

[kenshuck]

- The last one is correct, she's talking about multiple locks - not just hers.

Looked at it (like I say I'm learning and wanted to know) and it should be Our's (from a dictionary: You use ours to refer to something that belongs or relates both to yourself and to one or more other people.) Maybe both are correct? don't know, at this point it's more curiosity than anything else.
I tought that the structure shouldn't be that different from spanish (we usually don't repeat the same word in a phrase, less so if we are talking about something in specific)
Edit: yeah I know, it's going a little outside topic, but it's still related (?

[⚧ Squark]

- The last one is correct, she's talking about multiple locks - not just hers.

Looked at it (like I say I'm learning and wanted to know) and it should be Our's (from a dictionary: You use ours to refer to something that belongs or relates both to yourself and to one or more other people.) Maybe both are correct? don't know, at this point it's more curiosity than anything else.
I tought that the structure shouldn't be that different from spanish (we usually don't repeat the same word in a phrase, less so if we are talking about something in specific)
Edit: yeah I know, it's going a little outside topic, but it's still related (?

Sorry, but "Our's" is actually grammatically incorrect. The O should not be capitalised and the apostrophe is in error. The way it is with that apostrophe turns it into "our has" or "our is". So "ours" is fine. Same thing with the term "yours".
I acknowledge that independent possessive pronouns such as "ours" can be tricky for non-native speakers, however.

[kenshuck]

Sorry, but "Our's" is actually grammatically incorrect. The O should not be capitalised and the apostrophe is in error. The way it is with that apostrophe turns it into "our has" or "our is". So "ours" is fine. Same thing with the term "yours".
I acknowledge that independent possessive pronouns such as "ours" can be tricky for non-native speakers, however.

Yeah I knew that (ours without the apostrophe) it's just the damn custom from almost all possesives having It, I also almost always confuse is AND has
Edit: it's just a terrible idea to write in another language with the mobile corrector on 😡

[Dzeris]

./Events/Location/Changing Room Shared/BrokenSwimsuit.ve.xml

{His} eyes light up[color={Color}] "Thank you {PrincipalMr} {PrinciaplLast}.  They're great!"[/color]

./Events/Location/School/Library/LibraryRandom.ve.xml
{Name} is getting a quick 'reward' for getting a question right.
You're not sure if {P2_Name} bothered asking first...
But {P2_First}'s tongue is talented enough, that it probably doesn't matter anymore.

Spoiler

[close]

[Dzeris]

HHS+1.10.3.5-Release\Schools\NormalSchool\Events\Location\Shopping Mall\SherilynSarahMeetup.ve.xml

[color={P2_Color}]"I would say I like a variety of movies,"[/color] {P2_Color} says, [color={P2_Color}]"Action, Drama, and Mystery are up there though."[/color]

[Dzeris]

HHS+1.10.3.5-Release\Schools\NormalSchool\Events\ExtensionLibrary\Smartphone\Journal\Clubs\Club_ReligiousStudies.ve.xml

      <Str>
•  Agreed to let them run a Snack Bar (as long as they cover the club's running costs).</Str>

I think principal agreed on something else.

[Dzeris]

HHS+1.10.3.5-Release\Schools\NormalSchool\Events\Location\School\Classroom Shared\Upskirt.ve.xml
    <SeqVar_String>
      <ID>338</ID>
      <Coords>
        <X>2029</X>
        <Y>2458</Y>
      </Coords>
      <Str>{Name} has walked full into {Fem2_Name} sending them both tumbling to the floor.

Spoiler

[close]

[⚧ Squark]

PersonAttachedEvents\Principal\UnderwoodQuest\UnderwoodBadEnd.ve.xml

Grim

You're just walking along, minding your own business, when something solid hits you hard in the back head.

[close]

There's a missing "of the" after "back".
Also, there's a missing . after the word "ruined" later in the text.

[⚧ Squark]

PersonAttachedEvents\ClaireFuzushi\ParentGymClub.ve.xml has a two very small typos:

"Well, I like to used the gym hall..."

Should be "I'd like to use the gym hall..."

[⚧ Squark]

Here's another one (maybe two) and I'm going to use the Student's name to minimise confusion.

Location\School\Classroom Shared\RainSoaked.ve.xml
"Alea Roberts nearly bumps into as she comes in the door."

There's a missing "you" after "bumps into" and personally I feel that "comes through the door" is just a little better.