[Hareb]

I'm finally finished with Easy

It looks like free girl dialogue is now completely ready (and slave dialogue well past the halfway point with 14/23 done). I wonder, if the updated dialogue files should be added to 0.3, if it's release is getting closer?

[neronero]

After fixing lots and lots of syntax errors... New dialogue file, ready for playtesting.

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Primary additions since 0.2:
- Masochist
- Sweet
- Helper
- Princess
- Easy
- Tsundere
- Yandere
- Rebel

[Smaug]

Nice, will see if I have time later in the week.

[neronero]

To whoever chipped in with some Rebel lines, thanks for stepping up, they're a big help!

In some cases they may be altered a bit to make her sound more rebellious or to better fit the ingame situation.
This one gave me a good chuckle, coming from a rebel (this line is something she screams in desperation, right before the MC brutally rapes her)

[neronero]

Most lines for Rebel are done now as well, added it to the playtesting file above.

Might need to revisit how many lines she's sharing later. She tends to be pretty abrasive & potty-mouthed, while sharing most of her lines with "very dom".
That's fine in most cases, but the main issue is that "princess" becomes a spicy mix of pretending to be proper while occasionally cursing up a storm. Unsure if that's a good thing or a bad thing (it's not an actual princess after all)

[Hareb]

Nice!

Re: Princess... the way I wrote her longer origin answer is that she is not literally royalty, but from a somewhat noble lineage, even if her background was not that rich. Her girl.story_guardian brought her up telling her she is better than anyone else - For example, "My [girl.story_guardian] told me that one rose of the desert like me is worth more than a hundred commoners in the cities."

She's very spoilt an entitled, but she also has a nasty temper, when she doesn't get what she wants.

Whether she's in the slave market or in street corner, she's been through some rough shit. All of the slave backstories pretty bad stuff (she's more like to get the one, which begins by despising Sill's cooking, because she's noble. Was it the one that involves being fucked by a horse further down the line?). She probably learned a few swear words along the way.

[neronero]

Nerd is mostly done too.

She's not as "quiet" as the description suggests. I already noticed with Cold & Meek that writing a quiet character is really difficult, because you don't want to obscure the gameplay/meaning behind her responses. I think it might be possible to improve this a little bit by making lots of responses purely a narrator describing her body language, but for now I think this version will be OK.

I might be able to squeeze out one more personality soon. GPT-3 has been saving me a lot of time & effort.

[neronero]

Bimbo is done too, and creep is getting pretty close...

But I've taken a lot of creative liberty with my interpretation of "creep", which is worth discussing.

She has a few extra character traits to make her more interesting. Besides being a stalker, she has also become a bit of a chuunibyou now, with a healthy imagination and an undiagnosed case of ADHD.

I'm not sure if I've gone too far off the rails with this, because as a result she has evolved into more of a "weirdo" rather than an outright "creep". I personally think that she's way more fun that way, but opinions can differ on this.

For example, I could see the argument that she comes across as a bit too "immature" now and that this might be objectionable. (But then again, so is "meek"; plus the whole game is built around objectionable content to begin with)

[Hareb]

Rebel, nerd and bimbo all done?

Hurrah, really nice going! 

I guess Creep needs to be tested ... I'll have a look at her lines too. Without seeing them, an immature ADHD weirdo sounds like a more fun to have in your brothel than the obsessed stalker her free girl personality is...

EDIT They look funny ("only my Master is allowed to rape me" lol). I guess there is a chance they might lead to weird combinations, when smaller lines are put together, so playtesting needed.

[Hareb]

Also, I might be able to take up adding slave dialogue to another personality or two at some point in the spring.

I wonder, if A&O will have time to finish his two? (Holy and Class President)

I'll also finish writing the bookworm event after Christmas. Haven't had the time and energy in late autumn (it's a combo of being busy at work, watching football and now having lots of friends and relatives to meet).

[neronero]

an immature ADHD weirdo sounds like a more fun to have in your brothel than the obsessed stalker her free girl personality is...

I think so!  and I don't mind the idea that personalities change slightly as they enter your brothel, as if there has been some character development, or as if you get to know them more intimately.

Also, I might be able to take up adding slave dialogue to another personality or two at some point in the spring.

I wonder, if A&O will have time to finish his two? (Holy and Class President)

I don't mind picking it up at some point if A&O doesn't feel up for it. By now, I feel like I've become a pro at making GPT-3 do the work for me. 
But for now, after I've gone over creep's line-sharing and made a new test-file, I'd consider our sprint towards 0.3 done and the rest can wait a while until the next big update.

[neronero]

After fixing lots and lots of syntax errors... New dialogue file, ready for playtesting.

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File is updated with nerd, bimbo and creep now also included.

[vadi92]

So far the only thing i found :
1. a missing "," in line line 4482 after "chores?"
2. anyhone to anyone line 6660 and 6466
3. g: (not needed) Come to [brothel.name]! We have whores!" line 4554
4. line 4487 and 4488 are full on narration. edit: same with line 3730





Edit: i will edit this a few times for sure

[neronero]

4. line 4487 and 4488 are full on narration. edit: same with line 3730

I was only able to find 2 of these (and they might be different from the ones you meant, but they had the same issue) I dunno if the lines maybe went out of sync after adding the latest personalities?
It's better if you quote (some of) the line I think, so we can know for sure what line to fix.

[vadi92]

I was only able to find 2 of these (and they might be different from the ones you meant, but they had the same issue) I dunno if the lines maybe went out of sync after adding the latest personalities?

Maybe. I dont know. Well the line's what i posted are used in sexual training.
Line 3730 "Ugh... This is so degrading!"
Line 4487 "Oh my, you're making me do naughty things again...", "I'm a little curious, where do you get all these ideas from?! (for this both are narration)
Line 4488 "I guess it's time to get naughty again! *giggle*"

I post a few more if i found some.

Edit:
line 2569 in the face, right?" "mc: It really depends (missing comma)
line 6231 I'm a prostitute!" "Housework? Chores? change it to "I'm a prostitute! Housework? Chores?" or add a comma your choice
Edit2:
line 5433 *sob* No! This is immoral. (narration)
line 4484 "g: When the meaning of your words (not needed)